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What does it take to get into the top law schools? Most law schools admit fewer than 30 percent of their applicants - and the very top schools admit under 15 percent.

Plenty of applicants have impressive grades and high LSATs. But what they don't have is your own unique experience - and your personal statement and essays.

Your essays can help you stand out from the crowd and impress law school admissions officers. That's where Vault comes in. Whether you've got a raw first draft or you're just giving your final draft an extra look, Vault's editors - students and graduates of top law schools - will enhance the impact of your all-important admissions essay.

Admissions Essay Review

• Send your essay to Vault
• We'll return your essay within two business days with detailed commentary and suggested edits
• After further feedback, you'll receive your improved essay

Our expert editors will:

• Level with you - you'll receive honest, thorough feedback
• Help give your essay the personal "hook" that catches admissions officers' eye
• Ensure your individual voice comes through
• See that your argument for law school is clearly conveyed
• Correct your grammar, spelling and word choice
• Sharpen and correct vague, flabby and/or insincere prose and phrases
• Seek out and destroy clich�s
• Make your essay read smoothly and logically

Submitting a resume with your application?

• Get a Vault expert resume review along with your admissions essay review
• Vault's resume review was named the "top choice" for resume makeovers by The Wall Street Journal

Admissions Passport Are you looking for an admissions coach to guide you through the admissions process for law school? Look no further than Vault Admissions Passport. You don't need us to tell you that admission to a top school is incredibly difficult and demanding - and that you're competing against a world full of top applicants. With the Admissions Passport, you'll be guaranteed the following: Unlimited review of your essays and other short-answer items on your application for any given school (two business days) Weekly phone conference with your admissions advisor Anytime access to your admissions advisor via e-mail Unlimited review of your resume and recommendations Don't go it alone on your admissions - getting into a top program and school is one of the best investments you can make in your future. You'll begin with a scheduled phone consultation with your admissions advisor. If you don't have completed essays yet, your advisor will help you outline them. Then, submit your first drafts to your Vault admissions advisor. Your Vault advisor will then work with you and review your essays, short answers, resume, recommendations and anything else needed for your application.