|
|
|
|
You already know that the admissions process for top colleges, law schools and business schools is ultra-competitive.
Make sure you stand out from the crowd with Vault's expert Admissions Essay Review service. Get detailed commentary and suggested
edits in 2 business days.
|
|
|
|
|
|
College/Undergraduate Essays
Many top colleges routinely reject valedictorians, athletes and other top students - accepting less than 20 or even 10 percent of their applicants.
You've already taken the SAT and received your GPA.
Now, the only way you can add the personal touch to your application and stand out from the crowd is to write the best essays you possibly can.
|
  
Law School Essays
Most law schools admit fewer than 30 percent of their applicants - the very top schools admit under 15 percent.
Plenty of applicants have impressive grades and high LSATs. But what they don't have is your own unique experience - and your personal statement and essays.
Make sure your essays help you stand out from the crowd and impress law school admissions officers.
|
MBA Essays
The MBA is an important investment in your future. But let's face it - you want to gain admission to the best MBA program possible. You can't change your GMAT or your work experience, but what you can control is your essay.
Now, the only way you can add the personal touch to your application and emphasize what makes you stand out from the crowd is to write the best essays you possibly can.
|
Medical School Essays
Want to go to medical school? In 2006, over 40,000 other applicants did too. Make sure your application stands out from the competition - present the best possible personal statement you can. Vault can help. Submit your essay for review now!
|
Graduate School Essays
Want to gain admission to a top graduate program? From engineering to the LLM to American history, Vault has experts to help you maximize the impact of your essay on your graduate school application. Make sure you spend your grad school years at the school you want - get an advantage through Vault Admissions.
|
Admissions Passport
Are you looking for an admissions coach to guide you through the admissions process for law, MBA and undergraduate programs?
Look no further than Vault Admissions Passport. You don't need us to tell you that admission to a top school is incredibly difficult and demanding - and that you're competing against a world full of top applicants.
With the Admissions Passport, you'll be guaranteed the following:
- Unlimited review of your essays and other short-answer items on your application for any given school (two business days)
- Weekly phone conference with your admissions advisor
- Anytime access to your admissions advisor via e-mail
- Unlimited review of your resume and recommendations
Don't go it alone on your admissions - getting into a top program and school is one of the best investments you can make in your future.
You'll begin with a scheduled phone consultation with your admissions advisor. If you don't have completed essays yet, your advisor will help you outline them. Then, submit your first drafts to your Vault admissions advisor. Your Vault advisor will then work with you and review your essays, short answers, resume, recommendations and anything else needed for your application.
|
Vault Gold Member Discount
Become a Vault Gold Member and receive a 15% discount on all your Vault Admissions Essay Reviews or Vault Guide purchases.
 Learn more about Gold Membership
If you're already a Gold Member, you simply have to
be logged in to your account to receive the discount. You can check to make sure you're logged in, by going to your member home page.
Vault Gift Certificates
Purchase a gift certificate applicable to Vault Career Services, Vault Guides and Vault Gold Membership. Learn more
|
|
|
|
 |
Send your essay to Vault
|
|
We'll return your essay with detailed commentary and suggested edits within 2 business days
|
|
If you like, rewrite and send your essays back to your editor for another look
|
|
After further feedback, you'll receive your improved essay.
|
|
Help give your essay the personal "hook" that catches admissions officers' eye
|
|
Work with you to ensure your individual voice comes through
|
|
Level with you – you'll receive an honest, thorough evaluation
|
|
Correct your grammar, spelling and word choice
|
|
Sharpen and correct vague, flabby and/or insincere prose and phrases
|
|
Seek out and destroy clich�s
|
|
Help you make your essay read smoothly and logically
|
Questions about our service? Ask our editors at admissions@vault.com.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
About Vault Essay Editors
Our essay editors have degrees from top institutions like Stanford, Harvard, Wharton - and many of them have had their undergraduate admissions essays recognized as some of the best of their kind. Find out what our college editors can do for you.
|
|
Vault Admissions FAQ
Q: Why should I work with Vault on my applications?
A: Vault has the best combination of editors with deep expertise and a personal, accessible approach. Once you sign on with Vault, you'll receive your reviews within two business days and have access to their insight via email. Depending on the package you select, you'll receive one, two or unlimited reviews of our essay or essays, as well as phone conferences with your editor.
Q: What are you going to do to my application essays?
A: We will thoroughly review and edit your essay, help you shape its theme, introduction, conclusion and organization, and help you discover what makes you a powerful applicant. We'll also make sure your essay is free of grammatical and spelling errors. We will make edits and comments directly on your essay, using the track changes function.
Q: Great! I can't wait to sit back and let you write my essays!
A: That's not how it works - and you wouldn't want it to work that way. Vault won't write your essays for you. Your greatest strength is your own unique voice. Vault editors will assist you in finding and refining your voice through your own personal prose.
Q: How quickly will I get my essays?
Within two business days, often sooner.
Q: Oh no! I need it NOW!
Look into our rush service.
I have more questions!
E-mail us at admissions@vault.com..
|
|
|
